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PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:25 am    Post subject: [FOP] A Tornado hits Dimsdale Reply with quote

This was a story I wrote back in 2002 on the emerald.bbboy.net/nickdisk version. This story will be rewritten but might be a better version of what I wrote.

Now I know tornadoes don't normally hit the state of California, but the ones you're about to read about do.

Cast:
Myself
Timmy
Mr. Turner (Dad)
Mrs. Turner (Mom)
Chester
AJ
Cosmo
Wanda

By the way, you'll also learn of something shocking in this fanfic.

Story:
"Cockadoodleddoo!" called the rooster on the roof top waking up everyone in the morning like usual. It was a sunny blissful morning in Dimsdale. I woke up from my bed in my house located next to Timmy's house. I go to the bathroom, take a shower, and brush my teeth. Then I get dressed. I am wearing a brown T shirt and blue jeans.

Next I leave my door and walk next door to Timmy's house. I knock on the door and wait for a response. The door then opens. It's Timmy's Dad.

"Howdy there William," he says "Here for breakfast?"
"Sure," I say. They let me in for breakfast anytime I want to.
"Well come on in" Mr. Turner says. And so I do.

Mr. Turner escorts me into the kitchen. My little buddy Timmy is sitting at the breakfast table. His fish, Cosmo and Wanda, who are actually his Fairy Godparents are in the fishbowl, which is in the center of the table.
Mrs. Turner is over the stove making breakfast.

"What's cooking, Mrs. Turner?" I ask. "It smells like it's going to taste really good."
"Oh thank you William," she replies, "I am making pancakes, waffles, scrambled eggs, sausage, ham, bacon, hashbrowns and fresh squeezed orange juice.

"SO William," says Timmy, "Wanna go to Chester's house with me?"
"Why I'd be delighted," I say," When are we going?"
"After breakfast," he says.
"Kewl!" I say.

On TV, the morning news is on. They are discussing the weather. The weather man goes, "Good morning Dimsdale. It is a sunny morning but there is a possibility of severe thunderstorms later today. Also the national weather service is issuing a Tornado Watch for your county. All residents in the area are urged to take proper precautions."

"Tornadoes don't normally occur in California," I say, "Normally we get Earthquakes. Oh well, things change."

Mrs. TUrner brings our breakfast to the table. We all got our breakfast and ate. Mrs. Turner cooked up a storm and we ate a whole lot. We ate until we were full.

After that, Timmy went upstairs to bath and get dressed. I waited downstairs and I helped clean up the kitchen.

After that, Timmy came back downstairs.

"All set Timmy," I ask him.
"Yep," he says, "Are you ready?
"Ready when you are," I say.

And we head off.

Chapter 2 will be done another day. It could be weeks or months maybe before I come back to this fan fic. So enjoy what you see right now until then.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great as usual!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'va always been impressed with your writing, you have a talent.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 4:34 pm    Post subject: Chapter 2 Reply with quote

So we, Timmy and I arrive at the trailer park. Cosmo and Wanda tag along but they keep themselves hidden. I by the way am the only other human who knows about them but made it so that they don't have to go away forever. Maybe I'll explain that later.

Anyway we're at Chester's house. AJ and Elmer are already there they were waiting for us to show up.

"Hi guys" says Timmy and I.

"Hey Timmy, hey William", says Chester, AJ, and Elmer.

"So William and Timmy,"says AJ "ready to watch the Crash Nebula marathon with us?"
"We got the pop corn right here," says Chester, "My dad made it."

It wasn't popcorn, it was actually cotton balls.

"Yeah," I say, "Very soft, white and furry popcorn!"
"Don't worry," says AJ, "I brought some and I brought my own popcorn maker. It should be ready in no time."

"Thanks AJ," says me, "You're a real life saver."

Then Timmy pulls on my pant legs to get my attention. I condisend to him and he whispers this in my ear "You know, I could have wished for some pop corn."

"Oh right," I whisper back.

"Hey" says Elmer, "It's starting."
Aj makes our popcorn and we sit down and watch.

Stay tuned for Chapter 3
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 4:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is exciting I love tornado stories. So exciting especially at a trailer park Surpris
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 5:27 pm    Post subject: Chapter 3 Reply with quote

Thanks. I love them too. Ever since I was in 5th grade, and since I watched the movie "Twister" with Helen Hunt and Bill Paxton, I got highly interested in tornadoes. I was actually obsessed with tornadoes! I was in one once. And we had a tornado scare in 2001 when I was in Baltimore.

I previously wrote this story back in 2002 but it disapeared somewhere. It was titled "We're not in Kansas anymore". So I'm rewriting it but with a more reasonable title.

Thank you all for reading so far what I got.

SO here's the story.

So we are now sitting in Chester's trailer watching the Crash Nebula marathon. Things seem very quiet and peaceful.

Later I decide to step outside to get some fresh air. I leave the boys to watch the show. But when I step outside and look around, I see dark clouds in the distance. I even see lightning. ANd the lightning comes closer.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 6:05 pm    Post subject: Chapter 4 Reply with quote

I come back into the house and sit down and watch the show with the boys. I say nothing about the coming storm clouds. It does get darker outside and the sun disapears.

Then the emergancy beepers go off and a blue band appears on the top of the screen. It then says "The national weather service has issued a tornado warning for the following counties" whatever county Dimsdale is in. Then it goes "This includes the city of Dimsdale. Residents and visitors in these areas are urged to take proper precautions."

Then I grab the remote control and turn to the weather channel and it's saying the same thing. I run back outside and see the storm get closer. Then I saw a funnel cloud appear and it desended onto the ground and became a tornado. Danger became immenent.



I ran into the trailer and yelled to the boys it was time to evacuate the trailer. I told a them a tornado was coming! Timmy believes me but the other boys think it's my idea of a joke.

"Guys," says Timmy, "He's right, it said so on the radio this morning!"

Then bright lightning starts flashing and loud thunder occurs. Then it starts pouring down rain and the rain get's harder and harder.

"Come on boys," I say, "We have to find shelter immedietly!"

Timmy and AJ follow me outside in the pouring rain. Wind speed starts to pick up. When I look up, I see two more torndoes have formed.



We find a storm shelter. I'm surprised to even find one since this is the state of California that we're in. Whoever built this must have thought ahead. Whoever it was was very smart! Anyway, lightning is frequently flashing and thunder continues to boom! I bring TImmy and AJ into the storm cellar, which is where a lot of other people are going. Then I find that Elmer and CHester did not follow me. So I tell Timmy and AJ to get in the cellar and that I'll be right back.

I race back to Chester's trailer and find Chester and Elmer.

"Guy's come on!" I yell, "The tornadoes are coming! We have to go now! "

The boys get kind of scared. SO I run and grab them. As I'm about to head for the door, I see sparks showering down. A telephone pole near the trailer is getting ready to fall down. It falls down and blocks our exit.

"Oh no!" I say. I try to find an alternate escape. We go out through a window, which isn't safe, especially in a tornado but we had no other choice. We had to walk around the downed powerpole. I run as fast as I can to the shelter. One more telephone pole falls down. Another one that has fallen down is blown right at us. I duck and it flys right over my head. It barely misses me.

I manage to get Chester and Elmer into the shelter but I as I'm about to get myself in. I'm blown away. Fortunatley I grab hold of a still standing telephone pole. I'm trying my best to hold on. Four more tornadoes form. There are now a total of seven tornadoes. A few of them are heading for the trailer park. Then rain gives way to pea sized hail. The winds pick up even more and flying debris is shooting passed me. THe hail grows to cherry size and it falls harder. It then grows to being baseball sized. I'm getting pelted and pounded and it really hurts.

I try not to let go of the telephone pole even though my feet are off the ground. Fortunatley my clothes are not ripped off! Getting hit by that hail was like being beat up by a lot of people. I'm hit in the face and on my arms. It's unbareable. The tornadoes are getting closer. I lower my hand a little and it's a good thing I do because a pair of scissors are shoot at the telephone pole and at the part where my hand was. Had I not moved my hand I would have been impaled and I would have been in a whole lot more pain!

See what happens to me in the next chapter.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 6:21 pm    Post subject: Chapter 5 Reply with quote

So now and finally, I'm in the eye of the storm. The wind stops blowing. This is my oppertunity to run to the storm cellar immedietly! It's still hailing though. I approach the shelter. I forgot to mention that some of the trailers are pushed and blown around and even flipped over and flattened. Plus, that telephone pole I was holding on to gave out and fell over.

As I get to the shelter, I'm face to face with a twister. I am close enough to where I can get into the cellar and immedietly get in!

"Hey" says Timmy, "IT's William!"

I fall down unable to stand up after getting beat up by that hail. I am bleeding on my face and arms and my clothes are ripped up. Timmy, CHester, AJ, ELmer and a few others come to my aid and lift me up and bring me further away from the door to the shelter and lay me down again. It sounds like a freight train outside. There is a railway near where CHester lives but due to the tornadoes, trains won't be going by for quite some time.

Finally after a half an hour has gone by, things get quiet. We give it a few more minutes and then we came out. I was lifted out of the shelter. The whole place is a mess! It looked like World War III had occured. The entire trailer park was a warzone! It was like a giant little boy trashed his room! There was debris everywhere. I'm the only injured person in the entire Trailer Park area! but not the only injured person in the city. Some tornadoes have hit a few other places in Dimsdale. It didn't hit Timmy's neighborhood though.

I'll continue this in just a moment.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 6:28 pm    Post subject: Chapter 6 Reply with quote

Chester runs to find where his trailer was. He is highly devistated!

"NOOOOOOO!" he yells falling down on his knees, "My trailer is gone! I'm homeless now!"

Timmy runs and trys to console him.

"Don't worry dude," he says, "You can stay at my house. We'll take care of you until you get a new home."

In the meantime, I'm taken to the hospital by ambulence. I have to stay there overnight after getting pounded a lot by all that hail.

CHester and his father who found out about the tornadoes and his home being destroyed, he was away running erronds, stay at Timmy's house. I'm released from the hospital and am able to go back home.

Weeks later, the trailer park is rebuilt and I'm uninjured and Chester and his father move back to the trailer park and replace all they're stuff. Dimsdale is recovered and restored from the tornadoes. This was a first for Dimsdale, but will it be the last?

The End

Sorry Cosmo and Wanda weren't in a lot of this though.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That is really unlucky. Glad it didn't really happen!

Great story, William!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 11:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great story, but if it's written by William Person that is to be expected
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