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Little Dreamer
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:02 am    Post subject: a life problem Reply with quote

okay this is my vary first fanfic ( ever ) so if im doing something wrong just post it.


okay here we go


Ch.1 how the problem began


their was a kid name backdrop who was at school for a day. intil he spotted something that looks like a remote

hmm what is it? says backdrop.

he picked it up and went to his house to see this lookalike remote ( that was pink) on the internet.

where is the info seid backdrop.

while searching google nothing. then he checked yahho search but nothing. and then he searches on aol search but nothing. before long after i turned off my computer i heard a scream. it was my brother bob.backdrop went down the stairs to see what was the matter.

whats going on bob seid backdrop.

theirs footprints on the floor seid bob

so i followed them and it took foreer then the footprints stop by the toilet

backdrop seid, those footprints look familler.

after he turned aroundhe sees a tv with legs

What The!!!! before he seid the F bomb the legged TV beemed him in the TV and went into jimmy neutrons world

this must be a dream seid backdrop.
yea seid marty mcfly.

hey your not in my fanfic says backdrop.

but i was stucked into a legged TV too but why did it have legs and haves power to make people goe into television? seid marty mcfly.

i dont know seid backdrop, but were gonna find out

before that they walk around retroville and plus making marty mcfly confused. before they just steped foot in the road of retrovilee, he knew he was in a big problem.




Sourire so how is it Sourire
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 3:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good Fanfic so far, but try to double check your spelling and grammar... It took me a while to get some words... But it's good! Bravo

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 7:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks Sourire ppl. can be in my fanfic to all you have to do is ask
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can I be in it with Timmy?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2006 11:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wouldn't that make it a RPG?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 1:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ya know what nevermine it is getting confusing but im putting tommy_ babey in the fanfic ( as in a CH.)
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry for not posting all the time but heres an update on my almost dead fanfic......

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CH.2 the big switch


tommy_baby was playing around with his PS3 intil he saw a green remote


i never saw this befor, seid tommy_baby


after he pressed a buttoon on the remote, the TV sucked him in

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHh , seid tommy_baby

he was so weak and lazy ( sorry ) trhat he turned into a nicktoon. then,
he passes out brefore he hits the ground. he wakes up to find him in timmy room


What the heck happened here?, seid tommy_baby

he looks in a mirror to find that he was timmy]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, he seid

then vicky comes in and drags him to school

meanwhile,timmy wakes up in tommy_babys room.he was paniking and paniking. then, he looks at the window and sees that he is tommy_baby

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, seid timmy

then his mom draggs him up to school.
and that was there big problem

to be countinued.....
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later in CH3.
marty diching backdrop
timmy and tommy_baby goes to school
and the legged TV is on a rampage
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how did you like it? Sourire
( not my best work )( like the other 1 )
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