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PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 9:52 am    Post subject: [fanfic] Nicktoon Town: The Ghost Train Legend Reply with quote

This is to give a taste of an upcoming series, Nicktoon Town (not a copy of anyones fanfic at all)


CHAPTER 1: The Ghost Train

One stormy night, on the Cartoon Central Railroad, there was a diesel engine named EdMunD. EdMunD was nicknamed EMD, and he was a living locomotive who was evil. It's driver was just as evil, and hated steam engines with a burning passion.

Anyway, this night, the driver didn't show up. One of the steam locomotive drivers had to drive him. EMD hated this. His job that night was the tank car special to the junction with another railroad.

Next morning, the oil producers in New York rang up the railroad and told him the tankers had arrived. The director rang the first station, but EMD hadn't passed.

He was found, blown up and destroyed, in the Nicktoon River, up in the mountains. The driver was never seen again, however EMD is seen on a stromy night, planning his revenge on us...


"Gerald, what are you talking about?"

"The Ghost Train Legend," replied Gerald.

"Gerald, that was THE WORST GHOST STORY EVER!" yelled Jimmy.

Jimmy, Timmy, Arnold, Danny, Spongebob, Eliza, Jenny, Otto, thier friends and T.I.R, the SIR with a copy of Timmy's brain, were in the Krusty Krab getting lunch.

"Jimmy, give him a break!" yelled Timmy.

"Yeah!" said TIR.

"Will you shut up?" asked Timmy, frustrated.

"Why does he want revenge?" asked Danny.

A puffing noise was heard, and a nearby railway line felt a steam locomotive on it.

"Those," said Gerald, darkly, "EMD hates 'em."

"Aw, come on!" grumbled Jimmy, "This is worse then the Phantom of Retroland!"

"That was real," Carl pointed out.

"That's not the point..." Jimmy just took a frustrated bite of his Krabby Patty.

"So, Timmy," said Danny, changing the subject, "How's TIR going?"

"Annoying," grumbled Timmy.

"How?" asked TIR.

"You follow me everywhere, I can't say anything without you saying something, you keep stealing my hats..."

Indeed, TIR was always wearing a pink hat with the words, 'Property of Timmy Turner' on the tag.

"Now I know how Zim feels!" groaned Timmy.

"Dude, YOU'RE the one who lost the off switch," said Otto.

"Where did you get TIR, Timmy?" asked Chester.

"Internet."

The real reason why TIR existed was because Zim had kidnapped Timmy and used his brain on TIR, but that isn't important right now.

"Anyway," said Spongebob, "I'd better get to work! Any re-orders?"

"Another 'vegitarian' patty," asked Sam.

"Spongebob shuddered at the thought of removing a perfectly good patty, but obliged. Arnold, meanwhile, thought he'd seen something on the railroad...

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Keep it up with this stroy! Can't wait for more! I like it.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

CHAPTER 2: The Old Rail Station

That night, it rained hard. All seemed deserted at the old Nicktoon Town Rail Yards. An old locomotive rusted away in the Roundhouse. Once glamourous passenger cars rotted away.

No one wanted this place.

The old yardmaster still had to show up every night, to make sure that no tresspassers entered. This night, however, he was on vacation.

This very night was when intruders finally came.

"WHY ARE YOU STANDING ON MY HEAD!"

"SHUT UP, TIR!"

"TIMMY, STOP YELLING!"

"HE STARTED IT!"

"WELL I woah-AHHH! oof."

Jimmy had lead the others here to prove Gerald's tale was not true.

"Well, we're in," said Arnold.

The group walked around the old yard to the roundhouse. The rusty shapes of old machinery gave a creepy feeling to a place which by day would make a railfan cry.

At last, they entered the old Roundhouse. Jimmy dropped his torch.

Many ghost locomotives gathered around the turntable. On the turntable was EMD.

"It's time, my breatherin," said EMD, "That WE ruled the world, not those meddling humans!"

"But Boss," said a small red diesel, "There's more of them!"

"Shut up Motor," growled EMD.

"But," said a distintly British green one with two cabs, "What if those scoundrals led by the Neutron human get in the way?"

"Easy, Deltic," explained EMD, "We'll WIPE THEM OUT!"

There was a long silence.

"No-ones ever done it before," Otto joked.

"He is right," said Arnold.

"They're probably just another bunch of ghosts," said Danny.

"WHO SAID THAT?" roared EMD.

"Maybe," said a North English one named Northern Pike, "It was them."

The turntable turned. EMD faced the group.

"Run." said Jenny quickly.

They all ran, except TIR, who chickened out. He grabbed onto Timmy's leg, managing to trip him. The diesels caught up.

Meanwhile, the others managed to escape the yard, panting on the street in the rain.

"Is everyone here?" asked Jimmy.

"Usually, TIR would say something right now," said Eliza.

"And TIR can't live without the mother brain," Jenny pointed out.

"Hang on," said Spongebob, "Where's Danny?"

"He said something about taking them on," said Otto.

They listened, and heard nothing.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 5:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This sounds so good. Keep it up!
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks! Now here's...


CHAPTER 3: Eternity Hole

Danny woke up, baffled. His surrounding's had changed. He was now on a red floor with no feel. It spread on for miles, it seemed. In the middle was a great hole of water.

"Welcome to eternity pit!" smiled EMD, evily, "When something leads a bad life, they wind up in here. I, and my fellow diesels, escaped."

Danny, Timmy and TIR were in an old passenger car, coloured in dark blue with a yellow stripe."

"Where are we?" asked Timmy.

"Either the ghost zone, or our doom," said Danny, "Or possibly both."

"Send her away, Blik!" yelled Deltic.

"BLIK?"

Danny took a proper look. Gerald, Sandy, Chester, Waffle, Gordon and Cindy were aboard.

"Gerald?" asked Timmy.

"OK, I led these guys and Mr Blik and followed you," explained Gerald.

"Then were's Mr Blik?" asked Timmy.

"Yeah, where?" asked TIR.

"Blik pushed us into a hole and then we blacked out," explained Gordon.

"So Mr Blik's evil?" asked Danny.

"I didn't say that," said Gerald, "I forgot to mention, that EMD train hypnotised him after he caught you guys."

There was a jolt, and Blik flew inside.

"Huh...what is going on?" asked Blik, menicingly.

No-one answered. They were too busy noticing the way that car was now carrering down a hill. Just a second...

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" they all yelled.

Suddnely, the weren't falling.

"Phew, that was close..." said Danny, "Uh...Timmy, Cindy, what are you doing?"

"Nothing," they both said, letting go of each-other.

Danny looked out the window. It was raining. They were on the beach of an island.

"Oo nitty snitty mitti, Oo nitty snitty mitty.."

"Guys," said Danny, "We have company."

A bunch of humans in rags with sticks aproach.

Only then did anyone notice any bones.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fantastic series. Humanity's talents are limitless. Thanks for sharing your gift with the world. Keep it up.

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Fantastic series. Humanity's talents are limitless. Thanks for sharing your gift with the world. Keep it up.

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